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Lilith

A dweller in waste places, 
a void in foggy darkness, 
the unseen shadow that trails us. 
A doom that curses benign plants. 
A tenacious panting wolf feeding 
off the sorrows of the soil. 
She's the cold gaze of the night. 

Lethality of manchineel and apple 
of the deadly nightshade, the spike 
of morning glory and wake of angels 
trumpet. She withers the air with her 
slimy touch. Her hunt, a siren of poison ivy. 
She watches the bell of despair ring 
into the depths of her prey as she 
dances to their web of enchanted snares. She's the doom of every broken spine, the lingering fright In reoccurring nightmares. 

A blinded sailor in wails of 
the night storm. The immortal 
queen of hell. In her truth of 
mysterious lies, she is Amaya, Ebony, 
Leila. Her tangling names hanging 
in the fiery flames of her eyes. 
Bellona, Raven, her roaming tales. 
Tempest, Katrina, Loki, 
brimstone, Mara, Bela, Podo, 
a queen in diverse names 
she praises. Morana, Louhi, 
Lilith the night's own in untold battles. 

A cloak of choked silence
in the wander of her losses, 
a hundred babes a day she bore, 
yet stolen from her in eternity. 
A piercing wild cry for snatched 
souls' birth at night. And if she took 
or ate babies, it was a return, to satiate 
her feminine grief in her golden cage 
of poised facade, and depths of chaos. 

She's a duality in a villains mask. 
For every villain created, a silent haunting hurt was made. And their stories are 
hidden in the darkness they carry out.

I see her wings flapping at every mishap. 
Because she had a mind of her own she wouldn't have fallen for that sly act the serpent carried out on Eve and maybe everything would be different. 
We would have joined in her space of immortality but now her hair flows like 
the streams of Venus's vengeance. 
Her piercing eyes, cut deep into any 
soul that thinks her evil. She's the 
night and terror itself. 

Maybe Lilitu and Lamashtu would tell her tales but she forbids them to speak as she would not crawl in victimisation.
Her beauty is seduction itself and she 
carries her demoness torturing self 
into the fear of men that dream.
Winds have whispered that 
she is a rebellious death, 
the red threads that tie us 
to the blackness of our past. 
But we all know how uncertain 
the wind can be. It carries a virus 
of lies along its twist of deliveries, 
without a hint. And in the cave of our 
mind, a dark side of Lilith lives in us all. 
Most primal and hidden in the subconscious.

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Date: 6/13/2024 10:51:00 AM
Thank you so much, Dear Silent. It was a different and lovely path to go. Cheers.
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Date: 6/12/2024 1:01:00 PM
An epic poem about Lilith, where you included a lot of information about her.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 6/6/2024 1:13:00 AM
The demon of hell. Describes her well.
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Tonye George
Date: 6/25/2024 9:55:00 PM
Thank you Victor.
Date: 5/28/2024 10:53:00 AM
Tonye, there's an interesting possibility you explore about her grief and that is the cause of her behavior. It's insightful that many of the evils come about as a result of prior mistreatment of some kind. Our capacity for anger as the result of unresolved hurt, as you point out, is in all of us.
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Tonye George
Date: 5/28/2024 5:00:00 PM
Very true Duke. The hurt makes our dark side. Thank you for your support.
Date: 5/27/2024 5:46:00 AM
My gosh you've really delivered a dark and foreboding tale of this fictional, mythological character that seems to fascinate so many. I shivered when I came to the line that suggests a dark side of Lilith lives in us all. It really is a constant fight of light vs. dark within us. In the end, light must win or we are eternally doomed, without God in our world. Whether this wins the contest or not, it's a tremendous effort
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Tonye George
Date: 5/27/2024 5:54:00 AM
Very well said Tom. Thank you so much.

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