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I’m …

(thus told)
oft’ purveyor of a pen
drowning in the anguish of the heart …
bulletin:
love - not always love
love - always pain 
always -
all ways …
wherever, whatever, WHOever the
soul divides for,
consumed, one day …
lost to time’s bitter casualty -
forever’s coda,
postscript of existentialist id …
not an iota
escapes the darkest of fates
ALL is impermanent
and sorrow, the outcome …
in contention, then -
pray, how moans the sea
if not broken on a reef?
how chants a catbird
if not mourning for its mate?
how drinks the earth
without heaven’s weep?
and how bright a sun, if not immersed in
the bitter, unforgiving black of space?
please fear not, that ache -
those throes of casualty are but
the ripples of passing on love’s expanse -
those prayerful pangs,
the precious payment for
life’s dearest …
so, if that blessed abyss be
the stead of my demise,
embrace it, I shall …
and if those briny beads of the
eye are the only coursing for my ink,
so be it …
there are far more poisonous
potions to waste words …

upon.







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Date: 5/8/2025 11:31:00 PM
What a deeply moving and profound write as always dear greg, your way with words truly is impressive and i love how they always flow, your opening lines and especially "love - not always love love - always pain always - all ways …" really is soul hitting! I felt those lines the most, and how youv ended on a wise note, i agree, yes, and your use of such seamless alliterations and how youv phrased thoughts here is so very poetically pleasing! A new fave for me this is! Absolute pleasure reading! Sending you light always
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