Leaf


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                     her arms cling
                  to the celestial vine
                   where my heart
                 clings in perpetuity

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I Am Anaya

Date: 5/8/2025 9:48:00 AM

Great are the metaphors, melancholy are my interps, ') Congratulations on your well deserving top win, Jcb!

Ink Empress

Date: 5/8/2025 4:07:00 AM

Dear Jcb, how beautiful and seamless is the way youve woven words for the prompt! I love the softness of your imagery and how it flows so well and the opening lines especially really stood out! An exquisite definition of leaf, so poetically pleasing! Thank you for sharing! Congratulations on your top win! Sending you light

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/8/2025 1:50:00 AM

- Congratulations on your micro poem, Jcb :) - hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/30/2025 5:05:00 AM

- Lovely written, Jcb :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs