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KALEIDOSCOPIC DREAMS

She offered him a pill; he tried it as a teen, and still recalls that he saw beings never seen in colours no one knew, on worlds where no one's been... written 12th July for Nette's KALEIDOSCOPIC contest

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Date: 7/17/2025 1:47:00 PM
Good one, Jack ~ smooth flow
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Date: 7/16/2025 9:22:00 AM
that's very cool. Wish I could try that pill!
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Date: 7/13/2025 2:53:00 AM
This never happens to me when I inject Weetabix. Now, the little yellow pill, it does it, always.
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Date: 7/12/2025 2:27:00 PM
This one reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Definitely creative. Sara K
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