KALEIDOSCOPIC DREAMS

She offered him a pill;
he tried it as a teen,
and still recalls that he
saw beings never seen 
in colours no one knew,
on worlds where no one's been...

written 12th July for Nette's KALEIDOSCOPIC contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Gauthier Avatar
July 17, 2025 at 1:47 PM
Good one, Jack ~ smooth flow
Dietrich Avatar
July 16, 2025 at 9:22 AM
that's very cool. Wish I could try that pill!
Bell Avatar
July 13, 2025 at 2:53 AM
This never happens to me when I inject Weetabix. Now, the little yellow pill, it does it, always.
Kendrick Avatar
July 12, 2025 at 2:27 PM
This one reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Definitely creative. Sara K
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