kaleidoscopic dance

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1.26 am July 14, 2025

CONTEST: SOME KIND OF KALEIDOSCOPIC POETRY CONTEST

SPONSOR: POETESS NETTE ONCLAUD

POEM WRITTEN; JULY 14, 2025

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vibrant dancers ripple circling weave-like structures tiptoes synch with rhythm for striking moves’ mixtures like bright petals on space twirled ballet… a rapture

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Len Gasun

Date: 7/26/2025 8:11:00 PM

SOME KIND OF KALEIDOSCOPIC Contest Judged: 7/17/2025 10:03:00 AM Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud Place 3 (up to 5 multi-w)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/23/2025 1:41:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your lovely "kaleidoscopic dance" write. Great Pictures... Love your ending. Sounds like a winner to me. Hugs... Have a lovely/wonderful day writing away............

Len Gasun
Date: 7/26/2025 8:09:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your wonderful comment my dear poet friend Paula, i'm glad you enjoyed this poem of mine. Sorry for the late reply. I rarely find time at soup lately due to my bike accident and my workload at school teaching Math 3-6 and Arts 1-6. Again, thank you so much. Hugs

Bill Baker

Date: 7/14/2025 11:41:00 PM

A lovely poem for the contest, Len. Good Luck. Were you a dance student? It seems like you understand the ballet. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Len Gasun
Date: 7/15/2025 12:18:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your lovely comment my dear poet friend. I'm so glad to see you back. I can dance ballet when I was young and thin/slim.