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'jack the Daw' In Lancashire Dialect

'JACK the DAW' (In Lancashire Dialect)

Struttin’ and Puffin’ his big chest out,
The streets all clear, when he’s about.
Inside all’doors, waitin’  for’ thump
Families quake and animals jump!

Mam goes to’ door, money in hand
Shakin’ as she stares at his black neck band,
She dares’nt look in his blue black eyes
They say there’s murder an’ spent-up lies.

We just hear his voice, raucous and loud
“Your rent, your rent!” he shouts out proud
An’ all the street kids play
An’ all the street kids say,
Jack the Daw walks down the street
Jack the Daw with his great big feet
Jack the Daw, if he looks your way
Run away, run away, run away, run away!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 4/12/2021 11:03:00 AM
Well written poem and a great read. Thank you
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Janine Lever
Date: 4/24/2021 11:07:00 AM
Thank you for your comments catherine i appreciate it.
Date: 9/10/2020 1:29:00 PM
Clever write, enjoyed this one, love the way you used the birds to come up your tale- very imaginative. Emilia : )
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Janine Lever
Date: 3/29/2021 3:55:00 PM
Thank you emilia.
Date: 8/22/2020 8:19:00 AM
Haha! They are a bit evil looking. This does a lovely job of conjuring up a place and time - as well as Mr. JD!
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Janine Lever
Date: 8/23/2020 7:46:00 AM
Thank you for your comments, they are appreciated. Yes, this popped in my head as I was watching jackdaws strutting across the grass of a churchyard. It just came word for word and with it, the smell the sound and the whole scene. Its marvellous how the universe pops things in, during moments of stillness or contemplation. Thank you again.

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