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In Stillness

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     Lonely girl watching at the sky | Lonely girl, Beautiful wallpapers backgrounds, Lonley girl

rhythmic
  are movements
       of  breaths
    gently heaving

   as stars
flicker 
  through me--
     quiet, calm




Writing Challenge--Septolet Form Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France  10/7/2020

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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/11/2020 9:26:00 PM
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Peaceful! Congratulations!
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Constance La France
Date: 10/11/2020 6:31:00 AM
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Nette, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge- Septolet with this excellent poem, a FAV for me, great image too _Constance
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Gary Radice
Date: 10/10/2020 1:19:00 PM
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This is another great poem from the competition. Congratulations Nette. I've never heard of the septolet form before but it lends itself to great descriptive work.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/10/2020 1:02:00 PM
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- Beautifully written, Nette :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/10/2020 10:00:00 AM
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wonderful, Nette. Congratulations.
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Silent One
Date: 10/8/2020 8:24:00 AM
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Beautiful..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/8/2020 5:04:00 AM
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Great word choices..beautiful imagery in just a few words.
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