Illusku

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27.07.2025
Illusku : Illustrated Haiku Challenge Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: JCB Brul

I I I I (oIo) I \I/ I /I\ I I I / ( ) locust ( ) bouncy ¤ I ¤ A OO with two green powerful legs - OO protein ****** ---- source OO *************** for OOOOOOOOOOOO pets \

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Jay Narain

Date: 7/28/2025 10:45:00 AM

Very creative picture and poetry.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 7/28/2025 5:33:00 AM

Dear Anne-Lise, Only you could make a locust feel like a work of modern art and a line of existential poetry all in one! I absolutely loved the way your piece hops between visual play and biological poetry, it’s part insect, part dance, part diagram, and entirely you. Summer Blessings, My Dear Anne-Lise, Daniel

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 7/27/2025 4:40:00 PM

amazing what you've created here. Great contest contender! enjoy your evening, Sara

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/27/2025 3:12:00 PM

WOW!!! What a creative/fun write you have here. Love the the fun shapes and cute picture. "Good Luck" Hugs... Have a lovely day writing away.........

Joe Dimino

Date: 7/27/2025 3:04:00 PM

;))Wonderful -- got to be careful with those power concoctions. Leap right off the face of the earth.