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Specular fugue poem

The Specular Fugue poem was inspired by the Palindrome (Sotades—3rd century BC) and Specular poem  (Julia Copus—early 2000s), and gives these tired forms a new lease of life.

In free verse.

  1. Two stanzas in equal number of lines.
  2. The 1st stanza may be mundane.
  3. The 2nd stanza repeats the lines of the 1st stanza in exact reverse line order (eg  the 1st line of the 2nd stanza lines up with the last line of the 1st stanza), BUT not identical in phrasing:
    1. 1. Each line refracts into fugue, i.e. an alternative ‘truth’ to the recall of an event.*
    2. 2. Includes one tether word or phrase (as demonstrated in my poem) from each of the corresponding lines.
    3. 3. The tenses may be changed to suit the poem, or the semantics, eg drapes and curtains (from my poem below).

* It introduces a layer of dissociation: each line in stanza two becomes an alternative truth, echoing the fugue state where recall is fragmented, unreliable, or emotionally reshaped.

NOTE: (Line 7) loud here means bright or gaudy.


 

Collated papers filed and the bills paid as the kettle whistled invitingly. My son’s laughter drifting in through the window— I have forgotten to close the billowing drapes. A sempiteral tableau. An ephemeral scene crowds in: The loud curtains tucking at my memory; my son’s voice trapped in distress. The kettle whimpered as it boiled dry— old papers flutter in my periphery …

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Date: 7/18/2025 6:55:00 AM
Hey! I commented back on my last poem. :) Please check.
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Suzette Richards
Date: 7/18/2025 7:03:00 AM
Done :)
Date: 7/17/2025 1:21:00 PM
This is amazing work, Suzette. Your own feelings mix with your readers - leaves an impression, metaphorically...and on the person :)
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Suzette Richards
Date: 7/17/2025 11:44:00 PM
Poetry hits in the deep recesses of the heart or gets under people's skin - either way: that is what poetry is for (to my mind). Thanks for the compliment, Paige.
Date: 7/16/2025 11:12:00 AM
I like the contrast between stanzas.
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Suzette Richards
Date: 7/16/2025 12:26:00 PM
I enjoy contrasts in poems - I find it intriguing to offset ideas/perspectives. Thanks for the visit, Rick.

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