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Fatty deposits
called CELLULITE mostly plague
the pelvic region

Beg your pardon sir?
Oh, I see! It’s CELLULAR
Let’s try this again…

Fatty deposits
called CELLULAR mostly plague
the pelvic region


For the 'Cellular Reality' contest sponsored by Marvin Celestial

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/28/2015 6:01:00 PM
did it ever win? I think it is my favorite. ( I must have known if it won earlier because I had soupmailed you) Mine did terrible. got an HM ,maybe N/A!
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Tim Ryerson
Date: 9/28/2015 6:42:00 PM
Nope, didn't place...Guess he was looking for something serious...At least yours got an HM and I thought it was HILARIOUS
Date: 9/13/2015 5:59:00 PM
soupmail.
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Date: 9/7/2015 8:51:00 PM
hahaha, you did like me, just making fun of the topic!! It is great for humorous overtones!! Love yours.
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Date: 9/7/2015 7:46:00 AM
What a fun, clever poem. Best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 9/4/2015 3:07:00 AM
Tim, you made me giggle here.. :D!!! you surely have some humor!!! send some to me pls... :D!~Olive ELoisa
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