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I Remember That We Rowed, You Were Afraid

I remember that we rowed.
You were afraid.
And so, I gave the oars to you,
I thought, you see – control
Would help you feel
It was your boat that moved
Beneath your unsure feet.
And then, I saw your leg, and I liked you!
You laughed, hysterical!  You always laughed
When you were afraid.
I… I talked about ‘meaningful relationships’,
But you, as bold as only newness can make a person,
You wanted marriage!

You didn’t mean, with me!  Although, you married me!

And now, I’d give a bucketful of  suns,
To see you row, again!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 6/27/2019 7:57:00 AM
Hi Andrew: A MEMORY TO BE CHERISHED!
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Andrew Fairchild
Date: 6/27/2019 8:04:00 AM
Sure is, Ralph! She was so beautiful, and innocent and vulnerable and sweet that day!
Date: 6/23/2019 9:40:00 PM
what a magical memory and poetically told :)
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Andrew Fairchild
Date: 6/23/2019 9:44:00 PM
Thanks, P.S., hope you are well these days.
Date: 6/23/2019 7:45:00 AM
A beautiful memory that should not be forgotten! Well done, Andrew!
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Andrew Fairchild
Date: 6/23/2019 9:44:00 PM
Thank you. I am so glad to have the memory, now she is gone.

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