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I miss you Beach

I miss you Beach 
touch of your 
warm sand beneath my feet 
squishing between my toes 
I miss your 
sandy salty kiss up on my lips 
the whisper of the ocean 
collector of its treasures 
you save a special seat 
on the beach for me 
to watch the waves roll in 
till they reach my feet 
teasing me with its coldness 
I miss you 
like the seashells on my shelf 
miss the ocean 
they long to reconnect 
become one once again 
I miss you Beach 
so far apart we are 
you are forever on my mind 
and in my heart

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Date: 8/11/2024 3:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Sara K
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Karen Croft
Date: 8/11/2024 5:52:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 8/8/2024 12:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I loved reading your "I Miss you Beach" write. I love the beach but none close by. Oh yes, forever on my mind/my heart ......  Have a fun day............
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Karen Croft
Date: 8/8/2024 3:03:00 PM
Thanks for reading, have a great night!
Date: 8/8/2024 6:53:00 AM
so very nice, dear poet friend.
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Karen Croft
Date: 8/8/2024 8:05:00 AM
Thank you for reading!
Date: 8/8/2024 6:40:00 AM
Dear karen, i feel for you so very strongly: i remember in comments you did mention you havent been feeling well and i can understand why that would make you miss the beach the ocean and being in places where you feel free and find serenity. Iv seen my sister there. So i understand. I really love the line “ I miss you like the seashells on my shelf miss the ocean ” awwn this is a fave for me! Congratulations on your win and thank you for sharing this
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Karen Croft
Date: 8/8/2024 8:05:00 AM
Thank you dear poet for your kind words. We all struggles in life and have that special place that wipes them away!

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