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“It’s about the feel, the emotion. One note can say everything. You have to be faithful to the music in your head and your heart.” 
– David Gilmour

“To hear David Gilmour is to remember something you never lived, and long for it anyway. His guitar doesn’t play notes - it breathes prayers.” - Author

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A Sam Scott poem
1st July 2025
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Listen to poem:
As the ethereal guitar mesmerises
My soul responds
As if I dipped into a melodic bath
Of perfectly curated
Lovingly tempered 
Heart massaging
Candle flickering 
Water 

A fragrant tune invades 
My nostrils 
Flaring as the warm
Moistened air tumbles by
The world merges into
Perfection
Harmony
Stirring

The resonance
Of childhood memory
Percolating through the mist
As sliding strings 
Caress my ears
My mind drifting
Towards that past
Safer place

Yet this mesmerising medication
This tuneful tumult quelling
Perfect prescription
Is deeply welcome
Somewhere in my gut
My true being
Soothed as we surrender
To this soulful sabbath

May you never grow old
At the joyful table
Where your soul dines
Hear the whispers
Of the small pleasures
Taste the fermented flavours
Of the ordinary delights
Using all your available senses

When the music plays
To transport you
Run to catch the moment
Soak in the vapour
Embibe the elixir
Breathe it all in deeply
Holding in gratitude
Each heavenly moment

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 7/4/2025 6:14:00 PM
Wow, this is a true piece of art ! Wonderful! The writing is incredible! 'May you never grow old At the joyful table Where your soul dines' I love this line, it hits right in the heart! Best, Anne
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Date: 7/4/2025 11:57:00 PM
Dear Anne, thank you for your appreciation, you are a wonderful poet and do receive that as a blessing over you. S:) x

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