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Hide and Seek - Waltz Wave Repost

Rain
drizzles
from
cranky
skies; the sun
plays hide
and 
seek from
the clouds, but
soon the clouds tire
of play and
lift and
drift
away,
revealing
blue skies
and
sunshine's 
smile.

11/20/21

(syllable count was off on the first one I posted so I fixed it)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 11/20/2021 10:49:00 PM
The creativity and elegance of the writing make it a delightful read, KIM. I had a great time with it.
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Date: 11/20/2021 4:31:00 PM
Hello Kim Merryman, Wow! This is beautiful scene you paint with your words. Hugs.
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Date: 11/20/2021 2:51:00 PM
Wonderfully written in its genius and simplicity. Enjoyed it immensely. Have a great day my friend.
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