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Janice Avery loved deep green nature; like cherry sunset owls, gawping. She dwelt with her parents and Sissy, when old, golden days were walking. They lived out in the hilly country, where orangeish stars could be seen; And summer seemed to last forever, for days held a predominate sheen. Noons were filled with happiness laughter, that foreshadowed pink moon. Life was young, but blue world was old. Burgundy butterflies left cocoons! Mauve fog was doing its fadeaway, as never failing, friends came calling; When feisty fandango flowers flopped-in scent breezes, sweetly recalling! Future blooms were dreaming buds, in the spring of faultless, family visits, Via paths, lined with flowers of familiar hues. Birds sang in willow thickets. Janice lived in the house of cool shadows, beneath lovely, sheltering oaks; With colored birds at each window! Back fences, saw many tales and jokes! Rich, raspberry sun lent sights to remember, on their road of blue flowers. 'Ere reverent night fell richly! Like marmalade change, expected in hours. Numerous hued clouds were etched nebulously, on dusk skies, blackberry, When nostalgic neighbors came fondly, as a turquoise moon rose, solitary. 'Midnight valentine' camillas felt Cupid's arrows, under yellow stars of thrall; And 'Lady Margaret' passionflower vine, in burgundy, crept late to the ball! 'Gay goblin' flowers indulged red revelry, as 'brilliant lilies' rivaled the sun; When 'sultry scarlet' blooms pined for sunset, like nostalgic noon, undone! Janice was a birdwatcher, for she loved pretty songbirds' chirps and trills; But, she wanted to see them up close! So, she put seed on her windowsill. One day as she was entering the room, she saw a red cardinal, hopping; And pecking her seed as he hopped. Janice ran, but he was not stopping! Yet, Janice had gotten a good glimpse of red, like sunset skies, before dark; With a shake he'd flown into azure sky, destnation garden, or green park. Janice realized moments are precious, and the briefest, might be golden; And those are the ones most likely to revisit, once twinkling time is olden! 'Once I saw a little bird Go hop, hop, hop, So I said: – little bird, Will you stop, stop, stop? Then I was going to the window To say "How do you do?" But he shook his little tail, And away he flew!'

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Date: 8/1/2025 2:08:00 AM
A unique work you have penned in this one. I enjoyed reading about Janice. Sometimes in life the best is hard to see but when we do see it doors are opened to a fascinating world. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/1/2025 7:24:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely comments, Sara. Some moments are priceless. Your words uplift and delight. Blessings.
Date: 7/30/2025 5:14:00 AM
Janice has a sweet life, full of rich colors, textures, experiences. Another unique Evelyn write. Kudos
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/30/2025 5:49:00 PM
Thanks so much for the happy thoughts, Tom. Very best wishes. :)
Date: 7/30/2025 4:37:00 AM
I really liked this! The way you describe the colors and nature makes it feel so alive and cozy. The little story about Janice and the bird was sweet, too — it’s those small moments that stick with us. Made me smile!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/30/2025 5:48:00 PM
I'm glad you enjoyed this story, Rowena. That makes me feel great. Thank you for your lovely comments. :)
Date: 7/28/2025 5:38:00 AM
Dear Evelyn, Such a wonderful celebration of nature, family, and the preciousness of time. I think it feel like a living, breathing memory I could almost walk through. We use to have a cardinal come to the window every day and peck to say hello. I named him Carl but have not seen him this year. Your words were a wonderful rich and gentle journey. Summer Blessings, Dear Evelyn, Daniel
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/28/2025 6:23:00 PM
Thank you for the joy of your comment, dear friend. Cardinals visit my backyard a lot. You were fortunate to have one come so close. They're so enjoyable! All the best to you. hugs :)
Date: 7/27/2025 9:08:00 PM
So vividly written, and beautiful Evelyn. I love cardinals so much. I had some visit my backyard in the spring, they were such a delight!!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/28/2025 6:17:00 PM
BJ, I thank you so much for your comments. I enjoyed reading them. Birds are my favorite animal. ;)
Date: 7/26/2025 9:06:00 PM
I enjoy the scene. I've always enjoyed the Cardinals too.
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Date: 7/26/2025 9:41:00 PM
I'm lucky to be seeing a lot of cardinals these days. Thanks for your kind appreciation. :)
Date: 7/26/2025 8:48:00 AM
What lovely couplets. I'm enchanted with the use of colors, and still a great story line. Hugs.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/26/2025 8:37:00 PM
Thank you, Victor. Your appreciation of the colorful images thrills me. :)
Date: 7/26/2025 7:40:00 AM
so nice and delicious poetry, you have a great talent of painter, can feel that here
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/26/2025 8:34:00 PM
Thank you so much, Yann. Writing this was fun. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Date: 7/25/2025 6:59:00 PM
Nice poetic Couplet poetry, Evelyn. Your rhyming is always impeccable. Cute ending was fun to read. Your poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/26/2025 8:29:00 PM
I'm glad you had fun reading this, Bill. Many thanks for the fine compliments. Best wishes from Chicago, Evelyn :) .

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