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for a childhood memory

porch swing raining no scares free air small girl unfurl back, forth ghosts storm lightning blending lost flash backlash time meant ringlets rocking, rocking

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Date: 8/3/2025 11:02:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your fun write. Have a fun day writing away..........
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Date: 8/3/2025 7:23:00 AM
freshly baked, delish footles from your poetic fare, paige...yes!
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Date: 8/3/2025 7:19:00 AM
Wow—this is short but so powerful. The rhythm pulled me in like the swing itself. Feels haunting and nostalgic all at once.
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Date: 8/3/2025 4:23:00 AM
Dramatic...and slightly unnerving. Very effectual writing. :) john
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Date: 8/3/2025 12:52:00 AM
Nostalgic footles. What is that young girl unfurling except her dreams in the front porch. Big hugs
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