Eternal

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Hi my dear poets and poetess, I am telling the world that God wants to be called "Eternal". I don't know how I can get the whole world. I am Jacqueline R. Mendoza friend of Eternal God the Son, Jesus Christ. Please help me tell the world that God wants to be called Eternal, Eternal God, thank you. Jac

My mother got mad
Why am I saying God all the time
Didn’t know I’m saying God all the time
Asked God what do You want to be called 

Please give me a name either before or after God 
To my surprised, He answered
ETERNAL
Whoa I was shocked

I would call You Eternal God
WANT THE WORLD TO CALL ME ETERNAL
 WANT EVERYBODY NOT JUST YOU
You want the world to call You Eternal

Eternal God how do You want me to tell the world
I am nobody
Did not finish school not to have profession
Thought to write books to be distributed Globally

Poetrysoup you’re my other hope
To tell the world that God wants to be called Eternal
To be featured in Poetrysoup Homepage
Please help me

GOD WANTS TO BE CALLED ETERNAL NOT JUST ME

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Patrick Kelly

Date: 5/30/2025 6:45:00 AM

Jac, you are right, Jesus is the eternal God. In the beginning was the Word and the Word was with God and the Word was God. Your poem tells the truth. Education comes in many forms. I will read your poems. Thanks for getting in touch with me.

Jacqueline R. Mendoza
Date: 5/30/2025 10:44:00 AM

Yes, hello Patrick, I remember u bcoz Mr. Matthew Kelly has a son named Patrick Kelly but his son is maybe 5 or 6 years old so I don't think you're him and you're not, thank you for visiting. Even I am learning lol, thanks for appreciating my work.