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Disorientation

Drunk in love, red wine, a celebration
turquoise touch, my mind disorientation
losing track of teal time, in your embrace
racing heart of mine, in chocolate kiss taste

Fill me like a teacup, keep me hot
Imbalanced in love, ashamed I am not
I am a glutton for your amber attention
Push my button, sends another dimension.

I see the sea in your green eyes
Talk to me, even if it’s liquid lies
I like what you say, that I am ocean deep
Swim in me black babe, and swallow me.

No where to run from love so true
If we were to end I’d be bent and blue
I fit like a green glove every part of you
Disorientation celebration as you fit me too.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 10/15/2023 11:42:00 AM
Karen, Congratulations on your well-deserved contest win with this lovely poem.
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/15/2023 11:58:00 AM
Thanks Sotto!
Date: 10/15/2023 10:55:00 AM
Karen, this is an exquisite, romantic piece:-) I loved it! Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/15/2023 10:56:00 AM
Wow! Thanks for sponsoring a fun contest Edward!
Date: 10/11/2023 7:13:00 AM
Karen, a big CONGRATS on your win with this vividly descriptive romantic (and steamy-- :-) piece. Janice
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Date: 10/11/2023 8:45:00 AM
Thanks Janice. It was a shocking honor!
Date: 10/8/2023 1:46:00 PM
This is a lovely poem. Well done.
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/8/2023 2:06:00 PM
I'm glad you like it. Thanks Jeanette!
Date: 10/8/2023 10:10:00 AM
You are so romantic with this love poem. Loved it. Blessings.
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/8/2023 10:12:00 AM
Aw thank you Victor. Hugs and blessings to you.

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