Get Your Premium Membership

Dancing with Bees

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Sam Scott.


"The hum of bees is the voice of the garden" – Elizabeth Lawrence

-----
A Sam Scott poem:
17th January 2024
-----

Listen to poem:
You fascinate clearly
Once you're out of your hive
Flitting here, landing there
Keeping gardens alive

There's a sweetness, and yet
Nasty sting so beware
Your work all consumes 
As you zoom through the air

On return to the den
Over-share with a flurry
Of your flower-full journey
Full of buzzing and scurry

You waggle your tail 
With your moves; figure eight
So your bee-chums to flowers
Can with ease navigate

You are sharing the load
And you hum as you go
Your communal spirit
More successful than solo

I envy you somewhat 
Though your lifespan is shorter
That you dance while you work
I think more humanoids oughta

For we stress and we toil
Little sweetness to show
For our labouring lives
Whether sunshine or snow

Yet the Spring flowers beckon
In the garden of life
Perhaps to shimmy's the answer
To this trouble and strife

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/24/2024 5:33:00 AM
I like the rhythm, rhyme and flow as well of the content of this one, Sam. The drawing that goes along is awesome. Thanks for sharing your talent with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
Login to Reply
Scott Avatar
Sam Scott
Date: 1/24/2024 8:51:00 AM
You are welcome Sara - and thank you for some lovely positive words. I'm buzzin'. ;)
Date: 1/17/2024 5:43:00 PM
Sam, This is a great poem to remind me that Spring is just around the corner. Some great rhymes too!
Login to Reply
Scott Avatar
Sam Scott
Date: 1/17/2024 9:57:00 PM
Thanks Dean, seems like a long time coming.. just the optimism we (and bees everywhere) need :)
Date: 1/17/2024 2:35:00 AM
Oh, I love this! Amazing writing. God bless you always. Love, Gina
Login to Reply
Scott Avatar
Sam Scott
Date: 1/17/2024 6:18:00 AM
Thank you Gina :)) too kind x
Date: 1/17/2024 2:12:00 AM
This is so sweet Sam, what a delight to the readers and listeners to your charming poem:-) hugs jan
Login to Reply
Scott Avatar
Sam Scott
Date: 1/17/2024 6:19:00 AM
How lovely and generous of you to say, Jan x Thank you :)
Date: 1/17/2024 12:51:00 AM
Lovely picture and poem. Well written.
Login to Reply
Scott Avatar
Sam Scott
Date: 1/17/2024 1:54:00 AM
Thank you Jeanette :)
Date: 1/16/2024 10:06:00 PM
I enjoyed listening to your poem! My eyes are sore tonight and it was just wonderful listening!
Login to Reply
Scott Avatar
Sam Scott
Date: 1/16/2024 10:23:00 PM
.. and hope your eyes are better soon :)
Scott Avatar
Sam Scott
Date: 1/16/2024 10:13:00 PM
That is a beautiful comment to warm my heart, thank you Jessica :))

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry