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"The hum of bees is the voice of the garden" – Elizabeth Lawrence

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A Sam Scott poem:
17th January 2024
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You fascinate clearly Once you're out of your hive Flitting here, landing there Keeping gardens alive There's a sweetness, and yet Nasty sting so beware Your work all consumes As you zoom through the air On return to the den Over-share with a flurry Of your flower-full journey Full of buzzing and scurry You waggle your tail With your moves; figure eight So your bee-chums to flowers Can with ease navigate You are sharing the load And you hum as you go Your communal spirit More successful than solo I envy you somewhat Though your lifespan is shorter That you dance while you work I think more humanoids oughta For we stress and we toil Little sweetness to show For our labouring lives Whether sunshine or snow Yet the Spring flowers beckon In the garden of life Perhaps to shimmy's the answer To this trouble and strife

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Date: 1/24/2024 5:33:00 AM
I like the rhythm, rhyme and flow as well of the content of this one, Sam. The drawing that goes along is awesome. Thanks for sharing your talent with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 1/24/2024 8:51:00 AM
You are welcome Sara - and thank you for some lovely positive words. I'm buzzin'. ;)
Date: 1/17/2024 5:43:00 PM
Sam, This is a great poem to remind me that Spring is just around the corner. Some great rhymes too!
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Date: 1/17/2024 9:57:00 PM
Thanks Dean, seems like a long time coming.. just the optimism we (and bees everywhere) need :)
Date: 1/17/2024 2:35:00 AM
Oh, I love this! Amazing writing. God bless you always. Love, Gina
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Date: 1/17/2024 6:18:00 AM
Thank you Gina :)) too kind x
Date: 1/17/2024 2:12:00 AM
This is so sweet Sam, what a delight to the readers and listeners to your charming poem:-) hugs jan
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Date: 1/17/2024 6:19:00 AM
How lovely and generous of you to say, Jan x Thank you :)
Date: 1/17/2024 12:51:00 AM
Lovely picture and poem. Well written.
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Date: 1/17/2024 1:54:00 AM
Thank you Jeanette :)
Date: 1/16/2024 10:06:00 PM
I enjoyed listening to your poem! My eyes are sore tonight and it was just wonderful listening!
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Date: 1/16/2024 10:23:00 PM
.. and hope your eyes are better soon :)
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Date: 1/16/2024 10:13:00 PM
That is a beautiful comment to warm my heart, thank you Jessica :))

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