Notes About The Poem

"The hum of bees is the voice of the garden" – Elizabeth Lawrence

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A Sam Scott poem:
17th January 2024
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Dancing with Bees

You fascinate clearly
Once you're out of your hive
Flitting here, landing there
Keeping gardens alive

There's a sweetness, and yet
Nasty sting so beware
Your work all consumes 
As you zoom through the air

On return to the den
Over-share with a flurry
Of your flower-full journey
Full of buzzing and scurry

You waggle your tail 
With your moves; figure eight
So your bee-chums to flowers
Can with ease navigate

You are sharing the load
And you hum as you go
Your communal spirit
More successful than solo

I envy you somewhat 
Though your lifespan is shorter
That you dance while you work
I think more humanoids oughta

For we stress and we toil
Little sweetness to show
For our labouring lives
Whether sunshine or snow

Yet the Spring flowers beckon
In the garden of life
Perhaps to shimmy's the answer
To this trouble and strife
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Kendrick Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 5:33 AM
I like the rhythm, rhyme and flow as well of the content of this one, Sam. The drawing that goes along is awesome. Thanks for sharing your talent with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
Scott Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 8:51 AM
You are welcome Sara - and thank you for some lovely positive words. I'm buzzin'. ;)
Wood Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 5:43 PM
Sam, This is a great poem to remind me that Spring is just around the corner. Some great rhymes too!
Scott Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 9:57 PM
Thanks Dean, seems like a long time coming.. just the optimism we (and bees everywhere) need :)
Mcintosh Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 2:35 AM
Oh, I love this! Amazing writing. God bless you always. Love, Gina
Scott Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 6:18 AM
Thank you Gina :)) too kind x
Allison Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 2:12 AM
This is so sweet Sam, what a delight to the readers and listeners to your charming poem:-) hugs jan
Scott Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 6:19 AM
How lovely and generous of you to say, Jan x Thank you :)
Meadows Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 12:51 AM
Lovely picture and poem. Well written.
Scott Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 1:54 AM
Thank you Jeanette :)
Dawson Avatar
January 16, 2024 at 10:06 PM
I enjoyed listening to your poem! My eyes are sore tonight and it was just wonderful listening!
Scott Avatar
January 16, 2024 at 10:23 PM
.. and hope your eyes are better soon :)
Scott Avatar
January 16, 2024 at 10:13 PM
That is a beautiful comment to warm my heart, thank you Jessica :))
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