Daa

daa
waa waa
thaa

daa 
kaa kaa
waa

yaa yaa
thaa
waa

raa  
raa raa
thaa

daa

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Tom Woody

Date: 9/27/2024 6:51:00 AM

You really are warped. Not necessarily a bad thing

Clive Culverhouse
Date: 9/27/2024 6:59:00 AM

Thanks Tom, I think. You'd be surprised how many times I re-wrote it to get it just right, I know it could look like I spent 5 seconds on it but planning was a biggy with it, honestly

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/27/2024 6:06:00 AM

haha

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/27/2024 11:30:00 AM

Well, it seemed to be baby talk. Other than that can’t make heads or tails out of it. I guess I should have stuck with ha for the correct syllable count, eh?

Clive Culverhouse
Date: 9/27/2024 6:26:00 AM

Thanks Kim, I wonder did it give off a particular feeling or emotion?