Come To The Waters

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This is a form called a Pensee, but I deviated from the true form. Also, somewhat an example for my contest. I use Isaiah first as it relates to me then how I try to figure out my best trait. Soon we will be married sixty-three years, and I feel that God gave mankind a command to marry, love each other, be faithful, stay together, and have children so I have done that. Free drinks Water, wine, milk Holy Spirit offers them To a child at small church years past He loved me as I was Filled me Now a clean pot He saw some promise in me Though I saw it not, so now search For my positive trait Loyal Sticking, holding Through good, bad, sickness and health For sixty-three years stayed, prayed and loved I obeyed God and man

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Anisha Dutta

Date: 8/1/2025 7:59:00 AM

Inspirational and Enthusiastic. 'll try your Contest. Lovel

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/1/2025 9:27:00 AM

Thank you, Anisha. I hope to see your entry in my contest soon. I hope you enjoy writing your poem. Sara K

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 7/27/2025 4:06:00 PM

Sara, wow, precious and priceless, reminds me of Proverbs 31, and a fave for me! I will be married 48 years next month; you have us beat by 15 years! How wonderful, happy soon anniversary to you and your beloved husband <3

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/27/2025 4:50:00 PM

Just hang in there, BJ, the years will pass and 63 will be here before you know it. I am looking forward to another one. Thanks for stopping by and leaving such a kind review. Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 7/26/2025 4:24:00 PM

such a gentle and inspiring poem. What a faithful woman you are. I like how your poem flowed as it chronicled your religious growth. Well done, Sara K! Am faving, Sara B

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/27/2025 4:48:00 PM

Why, thank you, Sara. I am honored that you would fav it. It hasn't always been easy for me and us, but we kept on keeping on and here we are. Sara K

Jack Horne

Date: 7/26/2025 5:53:00 AM

heartfelt & inspiring write, my friend

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/26/2025 7:01:00 AM

Why, thank you, Jack. I appreciate the visit. Your presence was uplifting. Sara K