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Come, Shovel

Come, shovel
splinter my hands
let me feel even an iota of pain

for I am forever in
denial 
it seems

Come, shovel
let my bare foot 
push you deeper

until I bleed

so I can face this 
reality
in front of me

dig
dig
dig

...ditch
and dish out
all that dirt


make that hole 

big
big
big

...breach
and break out
all that brine,

all that whine

then let me fall

deep
deep
deep
d
  e
    e
     p

eep.



Come, shovel
bury me whole,
cover me
in peace

Let, me, be, number,
let, me, escape,
in 
mindless slumber.

even just for two days.


41920161208a23: Come, Shovel

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/19/2017 10:41:00 PM
Exquisitely somber and heart-wrenching, Kabuteng, and I love your attention to shape and flow ... wonderful, and another fav, (and I don't "fav" a lot, lol) ... blessings! <3
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Date: 12/6/2016 11:36:00 AM
Good flowing stuff. I can relate quite often. Like your style. Love, daver
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Date: 7/19/2016 10:31:00 AM
You ALWAYS hold my attention so well... This piece... Makes one think.
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Date: 4/25/2016 10:30:00 AM
good to see you visiting my work, nikko, you always leave such lovely, inspiring comments! and good to see a new free verse from you, written in your signature highly individualistic style! interesting piece :)
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Date: 4/24/2016 7:33:00 AM
Wouldn't we all like to be covered in peace. I love that sentiment Missy.. Awesome poem!! *hugs*
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Date: 4/18/2016 5:53:00 PM
A tremendous poem Nikko...we all wish for all our thoughts to be buried so we can rest...lovely...I need to send you a soupmail.
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Date: 4/18/2016 3:33:00 PM
Oh Nikko...I love the signature of your writes.What a powerful poem..Makes one dig deeper and deeper..beneath the dirt and darkness of my soul to find that peace that lie steeper..deeper..neath the beneath.Awesome.
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Date: 4/18/2016 1:08:00 PM
nikks!... i do like to enter into your psyche; this is a most stirring write!.. musta na?.. you never lost your distinct flavor!.. huggs
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