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Breaking Free

a world away from where I started
it's not a hallucination or rag tag illusion
I remember the phone ringing and the answer
that never joined us
I'm removed from it
like the classroom when we were young
I tried to jump through the hoops
invisible ones circular and scary
the promises of love and forever
disjointed attempts at realization
everyone who is close is far away
in dreams we attain that freedom
the light was lost
but a sliver of sun remained
through closed eyes I tried to feel
the remnants of a discovery
fueled by fantasy and feedback
the voice that tells you everything is alright
I believe it's god sometimes
letting go of the resistance
it just feels better....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/6/2018 10:48:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Jeffrey. Well done.
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Jeffrey Bovee
Date: 3/9/2018 7:29:00 AM
Line thank u I can't find my placement can u tell me how to see it Thank u for the warm wishes
Date: 2/27/2018 2:05:00 AM
Anything is possible in our dreams. You have a great way of articulating the pain that often comes with love. Brilliantly written Jeffrey! Congratulations on your win! : )
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Jeffrey Bovee
Date: 3/9/2018 7:30:00 AM
Thank u I really appreciate the feedback
Date: 2/26/2018 5:51:00 AM
letting go of the resistance just feels better, what a great way to end a poem, thank you and congrats : )-luloo
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