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Blueberry Soda Eye Mist

stinging blueberry soda eye mist
that burns the eyes 
and gives way to the nose 
as less than harmless 
now you see the teeny tiny
little swimming niggles
it won't give you the 
warm and friendly wiggles

it's misty blueberry soda smells great 
with a little nose burn 
but you can't sniff out 
where its coming from 
 you rub your eyes, surprise
what an eye-burner 
it makes it hurt 
increasingly extra 
you scratch your head 
and look around 
to see there is no one around 
what to do 
who to tell 
oh, what the hell!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/19/2017 2:17:00 PM
Verlecia, you have a delightful sense of humor and it shows in this fun poem:) Amitiés
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Verlecia Fields
Date: 5/21/2017 11:27:00 AM
Thank you - If i didn't laugh a little - i would have to cry a lot more (???)
Date: 5/19/2017 12:08:00 PM
A fun poem Verlecia...I can feel the niggles tickling my nose
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Verlecia Fields
Date: 5/21/2017 11:28:00 AM
Thank you - and yes i hope i got them all out Q_Q

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