Bird of Prey hiku

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Date written: 07/20/2025

osprey s w o o p i n g d o w n eyes trained on m o v i n g target ~ rabbit on the run

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/24/2025 3:27:00 PM

I really like this. Great utilization of downward line. Congrats in the contest

Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/24/2025 3:49:00 PM

Thank you very much, Andrea:-) I'm glad you did, my friend.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/24/2025 4:04:00 AM

We don't have ospreys here, but I know that was an interesting view. Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Sara K

Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/24/2025 5:03:00 AM

Thank you so much, Sara:-)

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/24/2025 2:20:00 AM

Outstanding shape, dear Edward. Your creativity is so artistically expressed. Congratulations on your trophy win. And thanks for my placement in your contest

Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/24/2025 5:03:00 AM

Thank you very much, Lasaad:-)