Notes About The Poem

Date written: 07/20/2025

Bird of Prey hiku


osprey s
             w
                o
                   o
                      p
                         i
                           n
                              g 
                               d
                                o
                                w
                                 n
eyes trained on m o v i n g target ~
rabbit on the run
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Miller Avatar
August 6, 2025 at 8:31 AM
Ah, another great creative write Edward, congratulations
Ibeh Avatar
August 6, 2025 at 7:04 PM
Thank you very much, Terry:-)
Dietrich Avatar
July 24, 2025 at 3:27 PM
I really like this. Great utilization of downward line. Congrats in the contest
Ibeh Avatar
July 24, 2025 at 3:49 PM
Thank you very much, Andrea:-) I'm glad you did, my friend.
Kendrick Avatar
July 24, 2025 at 4:04 AM
We don't have ospreys here, but I know that was an interesting view. Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Sara K
Ibeh Avatar
July 24, 2025 at 5:03 AM
Thank you so much, Sara:-)
Poet Avatar
July 24, 2025 at 2:20 AM
Outstanding shape, dear Edward. Your creativity is so artistically expressed. Congratulations on your trophy win. And thanks for my placement in your contest
Ibeh Avatar
July 24, 2025 at 5:03 AM
Thank you very much, Lasaad:-)
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