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When the leaves fall, 
I feel their green call to me
unto death. 
Whispering that what was fresh 
is no more. 
I hear their silence, see their veins 
weave through their becoming -  
from brittle leaves to tomorrow’s dust. 
And as the tree, limb to limb 
with the others,  
stands tall like a soldier ready for battle,  
the leaves fragment as they fall.  
They never try to hold on 
for they know their fate. 
They land as one 
with winter’s snowy lace calling 
to the bitterness all around 
to remind of what once was new 
born to beauty on high. 
Ignored by passerby, 
they lay desolate beneath the underlay  
of moments gone by, 
every kindness and cruelty and breath. 
December’s frozen face tries to smile 
in remembrance  
but can only shudder under the sullen sky,  
mourning reflected in an icy mirror,   
as it stings the earth (and I) 
with sleeted tears 
and the woeful winds commiserate.  
Oh, how they call to the small within 
me like innocent days 
and love taken for granted, 
but I, like the leaves, am silent.  

Life is wondrous and beautiful 
until the end.  
As the season of white melts into gray,  
the leaves, (and I), 
softly fade away.     


Written 5/7/22

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




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Date: 5/17/2022 3:31:00 PM
Rhonda, my heart did a little dance of joy when I saw you were posting again! I have missed your magnificent poetic soul and dazzling talent for writing deeply about life. This write shines with profound understanding of the transience of the lives we are given, and ties in so beautifully the metaphor of leaves glowing in their youthful beauty then silently embracing the fate that awaits them. The phrase "like innocent days and love taken for granted" is just so poignant. Love the title too. Fav! Welcome back, my poetry friend ~ John
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 5/19/2022 7:26:00 PM
Hi John, thank you so much for the warm welcome back and encouragement! I am humbled and inspired by your kind words and fav. I'm just hoping my muse stays with me for awhile. For now, I'm happy to be here and writing again. Rhonda xx

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