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Aysha's Bird

little bird on my window sill with broken wing yet you sing every night there you are like a gift a shining star alone I lie with loves remains your tender song a sooth refrain love letters burnt more pain Your melody gives me flight maybe I too can find my way with mended wings may we both fly to better days

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 9/1/2024 12:52:00 PM
Even though, one should be optimist, things always could be better.
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Date: 8/25/2024 11:09:00 PM
You poetry walks right past the superficial and artificial and tackles the depth of emotions, loved this.
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Date: 8/24/2024 10:39:00 AM
my eyes fill with tears reading this Aysha, i especially love the final stanza, its so uplifting. hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/24/2024 4:14:00 AM
great allegory, we have to care about others, thanks poet
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Date: 8/24/2024 1:12:00 AM
Beautiful. Great rhymes. I'm not very good at rhyme so my poems are mainly free verse.
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