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And So I Write

Dreams of Tuscany
With drawn lips
Portrayed like a silver chain
Where hearts surge to follow
Feathers from wings of night
Sits a poet with the stirring of light
Paints a pretty picture
With their words of life
That echoes through their corridors of their mind
Their hearts hold many sorrows riding slow in life
Many battles have been won
With their mighty muse
Many blessings to each dear
Poet for all the obstacles
To overcome
Nothing fancy mind you...Just
Sweet thoughts to each one that must write this night....

Brooke

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/18/2014 7:23:00 AM
Beautiful. As poets we do spend a lot of time in the "corridors of the mind" searching for thoughts and words to express them.
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/18/2014 10:18:00 AM
thank you Monterey.. hugs
Date: 5/17/2014 10:19:00 AM
This was nice Brooke. Enjoyed my gentle stroll down the page. And good thoughts to you as well.
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/17/2014 11:12:00 PM
Thank you vincent,,,
Date: 5/16/2014 8:41:00 PM
First time I read this and I am honestly deligthed. I shall keep coming back to read your delightful masterpieces.
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/17/2014 11:23:00 PM
Thank you Ivo...
Date: 5/16/2014 8:36:00 PM
The newest edition to my fav. list. Bravo!!!!
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/17/2014 11:58:00 PM
thank you Robert...
Date: 5/15/2014 8:08:00 PM
Oh Brooke what a beautiful piece, you certainly know how to use your pen, absolutely loved it, hope to see a lot more, take care my friend.......Vera........
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/15/2014 8:18:00 PM
Thank you Vera.. hugs
Date: 5/15/2014 7:16:00 PM
I love this inspiring write. Just wrote a reply in verse and will post it now. Bravo on a great write my friend! title, So I Write , A Reply
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/16/2014 8:34:00 PM
I was happy indeed that you thought my dedication to your original poem rated well! Thanks for your kind words of approval my friend..
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/15/2014 7:22:00 PM
AHHHH Robert... thats great I will be right there.. hugs

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