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An Innocent Childhood Memory

I had a secret dream,
watching a magnificent vessel at twilight
in a stream.

Painted in blue
to sail through dusk, the velvet bright
sea view.

Afloat,
dreams in my light
boat.

I had a secret dream,
to sail through dusk, the velvet bright
boat.

August 12, 2020

Let's Minichu on an innocent childhood memory Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Mohan Chutani

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Date: 8/31/2020 8:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, my friend. Blessings ~ John
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Date: 8/31/2020 10:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your pen did a wonderful childhood dream write. Enjoy your win...............
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Date: 8/31/2020 9:50:00 AM
Colourful as always! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 8/31/2020 9:37:00 AM
Aditi, a perfect Minichu. However, conveyed a bit deep meaning of childhood secret dreams. Was looking for small small innocent recollections. Maybe, my interpretation could be misplaced. congrats on a podium win. Mohan
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Date: 8/12/2020 11:49:00 AM
Your muse has been delightfully busy, Aditi. So nice to see the outpouring of your gifted quill. This is a lovely account of a childhood dream, I wish you well in this contest, my dear friend ~ John
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