Aditi Mishra Poet Rhyme

An Innocent Childhood Memory

I had a secret dream,
watching a magnificent vessel at twilight
in a stream.

Painted in blue
to sail through dusk, the velvet bright
sea view.

Afloat,
dreams in my light
boat.

I had a secret dream,
to sail through dusk, the velvet bright
boat.

August 12, 2020

Let's Minichu on an innocent childhood memory Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Mohan Chutani

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John Watt August 31, 2020 at 8:57 PM Congratulations on your win, my friend. Blessings ~ John

Paula Goldsmith August 31, 2020 at 10:19 AM Congratulations on your win. Your pen did a wonderful childhood dream write. Enjoy your win...............

Krish Radhakrishna August 31, 2020 at 9:50 AM Colourful as always! Congrats on your win!

Mohan Chutani August 31, 2020 at 9:37 AM Aditi, a perfect Minichu. However, conveyed a bit deep meaning of childhood secret dreams. Was looking for small small innocent recollections. Maybe, my interpretation could be misplaced. congrats on a podium win. Mohan

John Watt August 12, 2020 at 11:49 AM Your muse has been delightfully busy, Aditi. So nice to see the outpouring of your gifted quill. This is a lovely account of a childhood dream, I wish you well in this contest, my dear friend ~ John