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addiction

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David Crandall

Date: 8/3/2025 7:28:00 PM

the horror of addiction, expressed succinctly in word and picture - good job! I'm grateful, I don't have any chemical dependencies.

Len Gasun

Date: 8/2/2025 11:02:00 PM

Great and powerful message or word of wisdom is expressed well in your creative illustrated haiku my dear poet friend thrivini. I like it so much. This must be put into a poster for those teenagers who're mislead by addition to read and ponder. To my fave. If this is for a contest, a winner for me. Thanks for sharing. Sorry for a late visit. Blessings to you and best wishes always. Hugs

thriveni c mysore
Date: 8/3/2025 2:24:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind visit and precious words of encouragement, means a lot to me. Thank you dear friend for the blessings and good wishes. Hugs and cheers!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/26/2025 7:46:00 AM

You portrayed the idea of addiction with a well constructed shape. Maybe for a contest? Best of luck.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 7/27/2025 6:51:00 AM

I am grateful to you for your kind words, hope you are doing well dear poet. Thank you so much.

Dr. Vandana Sharma

Date: 7/24/2025 6:21:00 AM

Words as well the art exquisitely portrayed. Best wishes.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 7/27/2025 6:50:00 AM

I am so glad you liked it, thank you so much for your kind visit and words dear friend. thank you.

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/24/2025 5:20:00 AM

Nicely composed poem and exquisite thoughts, good luck if this is for a contest

thriveni c mysore
Date: 7/27/2025 6:49:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind visit and words. Thank you dear poet.