thriveni c mysore Poet Shape

addiction

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  II---- II  drowning body                         |     I----I----I
  II      II                      drowning mind     |     I----I----I----------
  II---- II  drowning soul                          |     I----I----I
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Karen Croft January 31, 2026 at 1:52 AM Sad, but so true!

Reya Suri August 24, 2025 at 12:44 PM This is pretty much what it feels like; I love how it's the shape of a needle. Your talent is off the charts :3

David Crandall August 3, 2025 at 7:28 PM the horror of addiction, expressed succinctly in word and picture - good job! I'm grateful, I don't have any chemical dependencies. thriveni c mysore August 4, 2025 at 7:44 AM Now that is a blessing dear friend. Thank you so much for your kind words, your appreciation means a lot to me. Thank you. Cheers!

Len Gasun August 2, 2025 at 11:02 PM Great and powerful message or word of wisdom is expressed well in your creative illustrated haiku my dear poet friend thrivini. I like it so much. This must be put into a poster for those teenagers who're mislead by addition to read and ponder. To my fave. If this is for a contest, a winner for me. Thanks for sharing. Sorry for a late visit. Blessings to you and best wishes always. Hugs thriveni c mysore August 3, 2025 at 2:24 AM Thank you so much for your kind visit and precious words of encouragement, means a lot to me. Thank you dear friend for the blessings and good wishes. Hugs and cheers!

Victor Buhagiar July 26, 2025 at 7:46 AM You portrayed the idea of addiction with a well constructed shape. Maybe for a contest? Best of luck. thriveni c mysore July 27, 2025 at 6:51 AM I am grateful to you for your kind words, hope you are doing well dear poet. Thank you so much.

Dr. Vandana Sharma July 24, 2025 at 6:21 AM Words as well the art exquisitely portrayed. Best wishes. thriveni c mysore July 27, 2025 at 6:50 AM I am so glad you liked it, thank you so much for your kind visit and words dear friend. thank you.

Sotto Poet July 24, 2025 at 5:20 AM Nicely composed poem and exquisite thoughts, good luck if this is for a contest thriveni c mysore July 27, 2025 at 6:49 AM Thank you so much for your kind visit and words. Thank you dear poet.