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addiction


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  II---- II  drowning body                         |     I----I----I
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  II---- II  drowning soul                          |     I----I----I
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Reya Suri

Date: 8/24/2025 12:44:00 PM

This is pretty much what it feels like; I love how it's the shape of a needle. Your talent is off the charts :3

David Crandall

Date: 8/3/2025 7:28:00 PM

the horror of addiction, expressed succinctly in word and picture - good job! I'm grateful, I don't have any chemical dependencies.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 8/4/2025 7:44:00 AM

Now that is a blessing dear friend. Thank you so much for your kind words, your appreciation means a lot to me. Thank you. Cheers!

Len Gasun

Date: 8/2/2025 11:02:00 PM

Great and powerful message or word of wisdom is expressed well in your creative illustrated haiku my dear poet friend thrivini. I like it so much. This must be put into a poster for those teenagers who're mislead by addition to read and ponder. To my fave. If this is for a contest, a winner for me. Thanks for sharing. Sorry for a late visit. Blessings to you and best wishes always. Hugs

thriveni c mysore
Date: 8/3/2025 2:24:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind visit and precious words of encouragement, means a lot to me. Thank you dear friend for the blessings and good wishes. Hugs and cheers!