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A Silent Soul

. . .it's been long
           way to long

silence sits at the tip of the tongue
then I run
   from the night
              her dark
              our songs
   that held on tight
   to what once was 
   or is neither helpless
   nor wrong

. . . it was me
      holding on
       to your breath
lying down 
in the many faces of death

but still all alone 
with the rain
each drop descending
developing 
a bubble
padded
to keep inside the pain

. . . I heard you
   in meadow past the way
   in places 
   merry souls once played
   and played and played
   a note one would never let slip away

   I slid and I hid
   in puddles deeper than the day
   made of stone and stick
   chained with locks 
   one could not have picked
   
   I lived or rather died
   in the muck and the drear
   holding nothing close nor near

   no one spoke
   whispers drowned 
   I but disappeared
   tongue obscure
   it could barely lick
   salt of tiny tears

. . . life I hear will never wait
    with chains or locks or pearly gates

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 7/27/2021 3:07:00 AM
In fine superb flow and meandering stanzas you muse in a fab eloquent way, holding onto love and the metaphors of being in muck you crafted in a smooth great way. Kudos!! ------<<<<<<<^^^^^>>>>>>>>~~~~~~>>>>>> Also plz do read and comment my newest poem here.
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Date: 6/25/2021 2:56:00 PM
Which coquettish versifying muse has knocked the wind out of your sails this time?I say off with her head...Queen of Hearts or Queen of Swords - crimson ignites the soul of both, but it is the dreaming poet who must rise above the curse of being caught by loving the muse who picks Morpheus minds like wild roses and wears their thorns like a chain around the body, blowing their sweet velvet petals as confectionery dreams back to them - some gifted recompense, to commence their stories a new, to ride along better shores.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 6/28/2021 5:32:00 AM
...sending out for Noah's Ark and takeout...all the loo paper shelves are empty over here and the shiz has hit the covid fan, masks mandatory, lockdown x 14 days
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 6/28/2021 5:30:00 AM
“The optimist sees the donut, the pessimist sees the hole.”
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Ts Poetry
Date: 6/27/2021 8:43:00 AM
30 days and 30 nights of rain it seems
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 6/25/2021 2:57:00 PM
https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/a_silent_song_999984
Date: 6/25/2021 10:16:00 AM
Beautifully expressed Tim. It is hard to let go of love even when there is nothing left to hold on to. Great to see you again:)
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Ts Poetry
Date: 6/27/2021 8:42:00 AM
Thanks DT

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