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A Pilgrimage

seagulls surf the wind
my escorts home
across the waves

                  streamlined gannets
                   sacred isle in view 
                      saffron tints

ocean flower breezes
with scents of heather mingled
island essence

                   rites of spring
                  frolicking hares
              scattering morning dew

eagles flying high
above the pagodas
sharing with angels

                   spectral in shadows 
                 castle walls in moonlight 
                    white stag foraging

eloquent landscape 
shrouded in mists of time
stones with stories

                   ears pricked on full alert
              deer transfixed in morning mist
                   ice cracks the silence

snow on distant hills
wind in ancient rowans
new stars twinkling

                         melting ice
                 slips down stippled bark
                      weeping cherry

beyond the twisted gate
flag irises bedeck the shore
beloved playground 

                   fragile and fleeting
             foxgloves in summertime 
                   granite enfolded

exotic rhododendrons 
sumptuous and alluring
bumblebees besotted

                    by the waterfall
                   dippers watching
                   trickle or torrent?

rhythmic shoreline
ageless slumbering hills
touching paradise 

                    music for the soul 
                 the lilting of the seasons 
                     an Arran symphony 


home again, my soul refreshed,
pilgrimage complete.
with Arran heath beneath my feet,
content- and feeling blessed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 9/28/2023 6:52:00 AM
Amazing writing. I just love this, friend. God bless you, Love, Gina
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Date: 8/16/2023 9:09:00 AM
Your poem is full of vivid imagery.. You have used your strong vocabulary really well here and created a wonderful poem..
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Peter Rees
Date: 8/16/2023 9:55:00 AM
So good to hear from you SO, it’s been a long time. Thank you so much for this wonderful comment which I truly appreciate
Date: 8/14/2023 9:18:00 PM
This is awesome ! A melange of beautiful scenes of the land and sea ! What a lovely assortment. This goes into my FAVE, dear friend Peter !
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Peter Rees
Date: 8/15/2023 1:35:00 AM
Thank you so much for this lovely comment and for the FAVE. Much appreciated.
Date: 8/12/2023 1:53:00 AM
I can taste the sea salt and feel the spindrift. What a wonderful homage to a lovely part of the world. Great to catch up with you again Peter. Cheers - Gary
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Peter Rees
Date: 8/12/2023 10:30:00 AM
Thank you Gary for this encouraging comment. Always good to hear from you.

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