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A Paradise

The clouds hid the glorious sun
A fair maiden stepped out to have fun
Barefoot she skipped around the dale
Pink tinged the cheeks so pale
Raven hair vibrantly flowed
Flowers kissed as she smiled
Tiny buds bloomed under her feet
Trees let down their branches for her to sit
Birds sang songs of joy and love
She befriended a little dove
Flowers begged to adorn her neck
Red lips bent to give them a sweet peck
A place between heaven and earth
Where this fair maiden has taken birth

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/4/2011 5:59:00 AM
Nicely rhythmic...reminiscent of a nicely drawn Disney romantic cartoon of the 50's (similar to Snow White.)
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