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A Paradise

The clouds hid the glorious sun A fair maiden stepped out to have fun Barefoot she skipped around the dale Pink tinged the cheeks so pale Raven hair vibrantly flowed Flowers kissed as she smiled Tiny buds bloomed under her feet Trees let down their branches for her to sit Birds sang songs of joy and love She befriended a little dove Flowers begged to adorn her neck Red lips bent to give them a sweet peck A place between heaven and earth Where this fair maiden has taken birth

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/4/2011 5:59:00 AM
Nicely rhythmic...reminiscent of a nicely drawn Disney romantic cartoon of the 50's (similar to Snow White.)
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