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tea spoon air-oars

existence be
h/our time
mind-body flight...

as winged...
up and down
periods of

waiting...
for some
real-at-tea

but in...
a pressed-sense
of thought

now...
it means
i forgot

...cold cup...microwave!...


len



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Date: 5/12/2025 1:04:00 PM
Struggle between mundane tasks and the pursuit of deeper significance. A remarkable piece of writing. Fascinating; I like your first reactions.
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Date: 5/12/2025 5:08:00 PM
thankyou good sir : ) len
Date: 5/8/2025 4:29:00 PM
Interesting- love love your impressions, "real-at-tea but... a pressed-sense of thought now... means a cold cup"
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Date: 5/9/2025 5:17:00 AM
thanks.....much appreciated........len
Date: 5/6/2025 7:04:00 PM
A tension between between routines and search for meaning.An extra-ordinary write.
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Sand Blown
Date: 5/7/2025 2:32:00 PM
thanks....sometimes simple is difficult........len

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