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Inevitability

                                             I always feel the
                                                 stiff breeze in my heart.
                                       The rumbling ,rolling thunder
                                       growls in the overcast, vast,
                                           inky sky.
                                        The lily is asphyxiated
                                              by an utter,
                                         excruciating agony,
                                          it murmurs things
                                                   unsaid.
                                        It fills with pure,
                                           deeep-rooted fears,
                                        the verdict is unknown.
                                        Raindrops water my soul
                                               like an endless
                                           angst weaves into the
                                            unobtrusive path.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/10/2024 4:10:00 PM

Hello Mulu, Tjhere is nothing wrong with you poem. it is well written. blessings my friend. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/11/2024 3:06:00 PM

Hello Mulu, Thank you. Enjloy your evening. my friend. /Darlene/.

Mulu Magdalinos
Date: 4/11/2024 11:07:00 AM

Hello Darlene,Thank you Darlene.Have a blessed day, my dear friend.