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Micro Poem Poetry Contest

Wistful

Wistful, 
       wondering why.
                 Weeping. 
She cried alone, 
      as she sat 
             on rugged rock,
                 ruing she ever loved.


Placed 2

lost loveverse

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Ink Empress

Date: 5/8/2025 4:32:00 AM

Dear Victor, Beautiful and evocative poem, youv written very well for the prompt! I love the alliterations and your wordplay here, so subtle and soulful! And very fitting picture to go with your take too! Thank you for sharing! Congratulations on your win! Sending you light!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/8/2025 1:44:00 AM

- Congratulations on your micro poem, Victor :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/5/2025 4:55:00 AM

Beautiful alliteration!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/4/2025 1:40:00 PM

This is beautiful

Jan Allison

Date: 5/3/2025 2:29:00 PM

aww such a touching piece Victor, your words really moved me. hugs jan xx

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/1/2025 6:22:00 PM

A moving and sorrowful composition; best of luck in the contest, Victor!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/1/2025 10:50:00 AM

Oh no, woman's secret is out. I relate to this one. Fantastic.

Yann Rolland

Date: 5/1/2025 3:35:00 AM

touching and creative, enjoyed your poetry,

Zyrool Gifford

Date: 4/30/2025 6:17:00 AM

Hello Victor, this is a very touching piece. Good luck with the contest, my friend.

Valsa George

Date: 4/30/2025 12:19:00 AM

Sad and powerful! All the best dear Victor!

Paige Hind

Date: 4/29/2025 9:56:00 PM

Deep, it's beautiful.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 4/29/2025 12:14:00 PM

The heartbreak in these lines is well conveyed. So much is said in few words! I hope you are blessed with a win. :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/29/2025 12:05:00 PM

Your "Wistful" a wonderful yet sad write. Great Picture... "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a lovely day writing away.............

Joe Dimino

Date: 4/29/2025 8:41:00 AM

Broken hearts are worse than broken bones often. Love is a gamble...and the heart our greatest fortune to lose.

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/29/2025 6:42:00 AM

Soft, but powerful. I can feel your words. Well written. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/29/2025 4:34:00 AM

- Touching, Victor - Good luck in the contest - hugs

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 4/29/2025 4:07:00 AM

Beautiful yet sad a lovely micro poem Victor… Beryl

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/29/2025 3:41:00 AM

Sad one. There is a perfect mate for each person if only the two can get matched up some way. Thanks for sharing this one with us. I need to try a micro poem. Sara K