Dear Victor, Beautiful and evocative poem, youv written very well for the prompt! I love the alliterations and your wordplay here, so subtle and soulful! And very fitting picture to go with your take too! Thank you for sharing! Congratulations on your win! Sending you light!

- Congratulations on your micro poem, Victor :) - hugs

Beautiful alliteration!

This is beautiful

aww such a touching piece Victor, your words really moved me. hugs jan xx

A moving and sorrowful composition; best of luck in the contest, Victor!

Oh no, woman's secret is out. I relate to this one. Fantastic.

touching and creative, enjoyed your poetry,

Hello Victor, this is a very touching piece. Good luck with the contest, my friend.

Sad and powerful! All the best dear Victor!

Deep, it's beautiful.

The heartbreak in these lines is well conveyed. So much is said in few words! I hope you are blessed with a win. :)

Your "Wistful" a wonderful yet sad write. Great Picture... "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a lovely day writing away.............

Broken hearts are worse than broken bones often. Love is a gamble...and the heart our greatest fortune to lose.

Soft, but powerful. I can feel your words. Well written. :)

- Touching, Victor - Good luck in the contest - hugs

Beautiful yet sad a lovely micro poem Victor… Beryl

Sad one. There is a perfect mate for each person if only the two can get matched up some way. Thanks for sharing this one with us. I need to try a micro poem. Sara K

Unlucky in love, but she should never give up. Good luck in the contest Victor. Tom