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I am using soup to store this since something has happened to my files of poems on my computer. They all disappeared..Sara 

Whispers Guide Me

Whispers of my soul,
Guide me through this night,
A hidden diamond shines whole,
In this inner fight.

Light dances on my dreams,
Stars twinkle in my eyes,
The spirit gleams and beams,
As dawn begins to rise.

Will this day contain
All the magic of my prime
Though the old body remains
Can the brain reveal the rhyme 

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Valsa George Date: 8/19/2025 5:29:00 AM I missed seeing this as POTD. This is so heartwarming. Despite old age,we have dreams and the inner light gleams promising that we haven't lost everything of our youth. As long as there is room in our mind for new hopes, new days of sunlight will dawn. Congratulations on your honor, dear Sara. Login to Reply

Gordon Mcconnell Date: 8/19/2025 2:56:00 AM Lovely penning Sara, really enjoyed this short piece with nice rhyme and flow too. Blessings always,Gordon Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/19/2025 5:19:00 AM Why, thank you, Gordon. I appreciate the visit and the blessings. Sara K

Howard Kerr Date: 8/17/2025 12:15:00 AM Sara, Congrats on your richly deserved POTD selection with this enduring piece. Splendid choice of setting, scene and sentiment Howard Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/17/2025 3:54:00 AM Why, thank you, Howard. I appreciate the visit with such a nice review of my work. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues Date: 8/11/2025 5:34:00 PM Congrats on POTD! Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/12/2025 5:51:00 AM Why, thank you, Kim. Sara K

Daniel Henry Rodgers Date: 8/11/2025 12:03:00 PM Dear Sara, Congrats on POTD. Earlier this year, my hard drive failed, resulting in the loss of a significant amount of information. Although some of it was recoverable, much of it is lost forever. I loved your poem, and I am thankful to have a book of poems on PS as a great backup. Blessings, My Dear Sara, Daniel Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/11/2025 12:27:00 PM Thank you, Daniel, for sharing your information about loss when a computer crashes. If I could get into my old Microsoft account, then I could recover some of my information, but I could not find my account information needed. All it my fault but age and lack of knowledge is partly the blame. Sara K

Yann Rolland Date: 8/11/2025 2:45:00 AM so deep and inspiring, loved the images , congrats for POTD Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/11/2025 6:24:00 AM I am glad that you found my lines deep and inspiring. Your visit to say congrats is deeply appreciated. Sara K

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 8/10/2025 8:54:00 PM Delighted congratulations on POTD, Sara. :) Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/11/2025 6:22:00 AM Your visit to say congratulations is greatly appreciated. Sara K

Paige Hind Date: 8/10/2025 4:52:00 PM Wow! Congrats on POTD! <3 Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/11/2025 6:21:00 AM Thank you, Paige, for dropping by with congrats. Sara K

Sam Kauffman Date: 8/10/2025 3:25:00 PM Dear Sara, such a delightful poem filled with sparkling Hope and lovely images. Love the last line. Congratulations on your POTD. Blessings to you! Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/10/2025 4:36:00 PM Thank you, Sam. I need all the blessings I can get. Sara K

Brandy Nicole Date: 8/10/2025 2:28:00 PM Dearest Sara, you truly are a guiding light, and I feel so blessed being here in your presence. Your thoughts are so beautiful and they caress softly around my heart. Just letting you know that even a website such as this can crash. If proper backups aren't in place, poems can be lost. Many things can go wrong. I save all my work on a word document and then save it on a flash drive. If my computer crashes, all is safe on that flash drive. My best to you, my sweet friend. :) Hugs, Brandy Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/10/2025 4:35:00 PM Brandy, I never learned to do all of that so when my computer died, all died with it because I could not remember my passwords to get back into my Microsoft account. I got a computer repair shop man to come to try to help me and between he and I we got this new computer to the point where I can get to some things. There are so many safeguards now to keep someone from stealing an account that if you can't remember or have not written down all passwords and backed up things, well, we know the rest of the story. Sara K

Susan Lawrence Date: 8/10/2025 10:21:00 AM Dear Sara, I love- Light dances on my dreams ! Beautiful words and emotions carried me throughtout your poe. Congratulations on POTD. Big hugs, Susan :) Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/10/2025 4:31:00 PM Thank you, Susan. I am glad you found a line you liked best. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/10/2025 10:05:00 AM Back with Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Whispers Guide Me" write again. Have a blessed day with your win........... Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/10/2025 4:29:00 PM I appreciate you dropping back by, Paula. This day was nice so much better than the heat of summer. Sara K

Nancy Kaufman Date: 8/10/2025 9:44:00 AM Dear Sara, Congratulations on the honor of POTD. I loved the rhythmic alternative rhyme pattern of this poem. You're fluid pen, sharp mind and shining spirit are truly a gift to all. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/10/2025 4:28:00 PM Thank you, Nancy for your uplifting and encouraging words on this congratulatory comment. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara K

Chetta Achara Date: 8/10/2025 9:03:00 AM Nicely penned. Congrats on POTD. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/10/2025 12:25:00 PM Why, thank you, Chetta. I appreciate you dropping by with congratulations. Sara K

Bill Baker Date: 8/10/2025 8:20:00 AM Congratulation on this meaningful poem being chosen as the POTD, Sara! Enjoy your special day! I especially like the middle verse. Your brain seems to be doing great at rhyming my friend. Write On! A poet friend in Texas, Bill Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/10/2025 12:17:00 PM Thank you for the encouragement, Bill, by saying write on. I appreciate the visit and congratulations. Sara K

Joseph May Date: 8/10/2025 7:16:00 AM Wonderful verse Sara, Congrats on POTD Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/10/2025 12:16:00 PM Thank you, Joseph. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara K

Benjamin Bartley Date: 8/10/2025 7:06:00 AM Wow, my computer crashed about a year ago. This poem makes much more sense with the intro and picture. I feel ya'. I'm glad you were able to share and store your poems here at the Soup. Congrats and as always, thanks for sharing. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/10/2025 12:15:00 PM Benjamin, well, all my problems started with my computer crashing and then all my files disappeared, but I worked awhile at it yesterday and they have been found once again. Thanks for dropping by with congratulations. Sara K

Tom Woody Date: 8/10/2025 5:40:00 AM Pretty rhymes Sara. Almost feels like a soft lullaby. Enjoy your day in full sun Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/10/2025 12:13:00 PM Thank you, Tom. Cloudy day here though. Your visit was delightful. Sara K

Tania Kitchin Date: 8/10/2025 5:14:00 AM Sara, wonderfully penned. Congratulations on POTD. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/10/2025 12:13:00 PM Thanks for the visit to say congratulations. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara K

Rowena Velasco Date: 8/10/2025 4:08:00 AM Congratulations on your Poem of the Day! Your beautiful words truly deserved the spotlight—well done! Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/10/2025 8:29:00 AM Thank you, Rowena. I appreciate the visit and congratulations. Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker Date: 8/10/2025 2:51:00 AM returning to congratulate you on your POTD designation. applause! Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/10/2025 8:23:00 AM Why, thank you, Sara B. Nice of you to return. Sara K

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/10/2025 2:32:00 AM - Beautiful, Sara ... congratulations on yuor p.o.t.d. ... enjoy :) - hugs Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/10/2025 7:52:00 AM Thank you, Anne-Lise. Your support encourages me to continue to try to write. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar Date: 8/10/2025 2:15:00 AM Congratulations on POTD. A lovely poem which I admired a lot. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/10/2025 7:51:00 AM Ahh!! So nice of you, Victor, to give such high praise. Sara K

Unseeking Seeker Date: 8/10/2025 1:49:00 AM Beautiful, soulful musings, Sara. As we age, brain does slow down but if entwined with the heart, echoes its sublime melody gently, breath by breath. Congratulations on POTD Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/10/2025 7:06:00 AM US, yes, the whole body slows down but that God for the Holy Spirit within which will guide us if we listen to Him. Thank you for dropping by with congratulations. Sara K

Anne Winter Date: 8/10/2025 1:45:00 AM Dear Sara, congratulations on POTD! Enjoy your special day, dear friend :) Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/10/2025 7:04:00 AM I appreciate you dropping by to congratulate me on my poem getting POTD. Sara K

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