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When Money Becomes Power

I have known the hollow silence of empty hands, once full of gold, now dust and fading strands. I gave my heart in seasons bright and fair, helping those in need, with love laid bare. But when the coins ran out, the doors grew cold, no pennies left to buy a dream or hold. Help came shackled, wrapped in debt’s tight chain, not just my money lost, but name and pain. Hungry mouths like lightning split the sky, casting shadows, where whispered rumors lie. Their words—like thunder—crash without a sound, shaking the fragile ground where hope is found. Silent storms descend, louder than a scream, devouring truth, unraveling the dream. Penniless and weary, hunger gnaws more deep— not just for bread, but respect we keep. They drag me into fire’s scorching pit, complicating all, refusing to quit. Mockery’s cold rain falls without remorse, lies like chains that bind with crushing force. A world unfair, where power’s voice is bought, where kindness falters, and freedom’s lost. But in the ruins, a spark still burns bright— the power of kindness, a guiding light. Though empty now, my spirit sings clear, pure as a river that knows no fear. On paths ahead, I seek that gentle grace, where smiles bloom soft in a warm embrace.

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Date: 7/27/2025 8:42:00 PM
Rowena, I know a family that went through the same, they were kind and generous, and all was well, people loved the generous hearts, but then the husband lost his job in a massive lay-off. Rumors started spreading when they couldn't pay dues to the kids clubs at their church, rumors and vultures seemed to descend. They lost everything when they trusted family to their home when they left town for a job, only to return to everything stolen and the house literally ripped apart. I will continue....
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/27/2025 8:52:00 PM
Thank you for sharing that powerful story. It’s heartbreaking and yet deeply moving—how that family endured such betrayal and loss, yet clung to God’s promises without giving in to bitterness. That verse from Joel is one of the most hope-filled in all of Scripture… “I will restore to you the years that the locust hath eaten.” What a beautiful testimony of faith and redemption. Your words are a gentle balm—reminding me, and anyone else hurting, that God does see us, even in the wreckage. And yes, He is good. Always. Thank you for your prayers and your light.
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 7/27/2025 8:49:00 PM
I ran out of room :) Anyway, they held onto promises of God, one of their favorite verses was in Joel 2 from the Bible 'And I will restore to you the years that the locust hath eaten, the cankerworm, and the caterpiller, and the palmerworm, my great army which I sent among you.' And you know what? Though they lost everything the Lord blessed them, gave them a bigger home, a better job and more than they could keep, so they continued to bless others, even some that had hurt them. Hold onto God sweet spirit, He sees you in your pain. I will be praying He retores you as I saw Him restore that family. It was so wonderful. They still have scars, but refused to hate, just continued to pray for their enemies. God is so good!
Date: 7/23/2025 4:26:00 PM
A tragic experience to endure, Rowena. You were given unhuman strength and courage to overcome because of you loving, sharing and giving past. Blessings to you for sharing what you had. It's been said, "the love of money is the root of all evil." That refers to the lust for power and money which are quite the same. A FAV for my collection, Rowena. POTD / POTW level poetry, my friend. Blessings, Bill
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/23/2025 4:56:00 PM
Thank you so much, Bill. Your kind words and support mean the world to me. Grateful for the FAV and blessings!
Date: 7/23/2025 5:23:00 AM
I resonate so much with sentiment here & endurance articulated throughout poem. first line is a very powerful start to poem ~Love it ! You writing is softly strong, & certain. Feels very much like the writing of an Earth Angel. ThkU for connecting, Rowena. I feel younger poets like yourself will bring much change to Earth.x
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/23/2025 6:24:00 AM
Thank you so much for your beautiful words and heartfelt encouragement.
Date: 7/21/2025 9:08:00 AM
What a powerful write you have here. I enjoyed reading this one. Have A Blessed Day Writing Away.................
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/23/2025 6:22:00 AM
Thank you Paula! Wishing you a day full of inspiration and peace—may your own words flow freely and beautifully. Blessings always!

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