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Velvet Silence - Hiku 33 -

Written: August 07, 2025, for Brian Strand Contest

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Date: 8/13/2025 6:53:00 PM
This style of writing Haikus is becoming quite common here at poetry soup, my friend. You are great at it and I enjoy reading your poetry. Blessings, Bill
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Date: 8/11/2025 4:25:00 AM
Halcyon silence.....what a beautiful phrase. You always amaze, dear friend. Once more I am back to congratulate you on your first place win.
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Date: 8/10/2025 12:22:00 AM
Hi Sotto, Heartiest congratulations on this scintillating piece and selection on the basis of its authentic imaginitive nature Howard
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Date: 8/8/2025 11:56:00 PM
Love the soft, fading feel—like silence made visible. Really cool and unique!
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Date: 8/8/2025 2:53:00 PM
Very nicely created Sotto, GL in the contest
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Date: 8/8/2025 2:12:00 AM
- So beautifully described, Las :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 8/7/2025 11:55:00 PM
"Velvet dusk on burnished wings.... " Beautiful way of expressing. Wonderful haiku. All the best dear friend.
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Date: 8/7/2025 10:17:00 PM
A beautiful feeling this creates - mysterious, too :)
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Date: 8/7/2025 4:46:00 PM
halcyon silence! I love it and like what you did with this creation. Best wishes with the contest. Texas hugs, Sara
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Date: 8/7/2025 10:40:00 AM
What a creative/fun ~ write/shape. You are really good at this. "Good Luck" Have a lovely/fun day writing away...............
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