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m e a n d e r i n g    breeze
                                        g          v   e     
   c   a      e   e        i     n          o            r
            r           n                     meadows . . .
                                             
               o    d   n
      the  n    d   i   g   bluebells

windhaiku

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Anthony Biaanco

Date: 9/5/2025 2:53:00 PM

Hi Andrea, beautifully written with this format you actually turn the readers eyes into a breeze, very unique God Bless Anthony

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/6/2025 7:20:00 PM

Muchas gracias

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/30/2025 8:35:00 PM

I love that last line. Great accompaniment. Hugs – Kim.

Paige Hind

Date: 8/30/2025 7:34:00 PM

Lovely imagery!!

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Date: 8/30/2025 6:51:00 PM

Themes of freedom and gentle movement.The form is new to me.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/30/2025 1:48:00 PM

Floating air that has cooled can do some destructive things to summer's garden. Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Sara K

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/31/2025 3:44:00 AM

Okay, not a contender. It is a good one anyway. Thanks for sharing. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/30/2025 2:55:00 PM

It wasn't a good contender.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/30/2025 1:33:00 PM

So creative, Andrea, and fun. Nothing prettier than bluebells nodding in the afternoon sun! Blessings!

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/30/2025 2:55:00 PM

Thanks, sweetie

Joe Maverick

Date: 8/30/2025 11:45:00 AM

Its too hazy in the middle Andrea i think you Overdid the 'special effects' on this one..Hmm Let me try.??? A telescope lets see? Big end to The eye!!! No too distant.!!! Oh my..binoculars?? No a magnifiying glass..Ahh thats better.' Mind You Andrea its rather late for bluebells.? Then again you do have a bountifull talent..Did i glimpse a rose there somdwhere.?

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/30/2025 11:55:00 AM

it's never too late for nodding bluebells. Why do people think this haiku is meant for fall?

Robert Warlov

Date: 8/30/2025 1:53:00 AM

Thoes bluebells are up to something. Petal'n conspiracys?

Valsa George

Date: 8/30/2025 1:33:00 AM

I can see the bluebells nodding in breeze. Beautiful haiku.

Joe Dimino

Date: 8/29/2025 11:23:00 PM

Wonderful imagery. Quite a witty presentation. I give your bluebells the nod -- could have a winner here. Best of luck in contest.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/30/2025 9:13:00 AM

Thanks,,sure hope so

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 8/29/2025 5:32:00 PM

creative form...loved nodding bluebells. Best wishes with this entry in the contest, Sara

Paul Callus

Date: 8/29/2025 3:02:00 PM

Good one, Andrea; I'd have loved to see that breeze meandering......//For some reason I never use the word 'careening // paul

Jay Narain

Date: 8/29/2025 11:11:00 AM

Great haiku. Autumn wind over bluebells.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 8/29/2025 11:11:00 AM

Took me a second to figure out exactly what the bluebells were doing. I like your last line a lot. Did you see the tree that won in his other contest? I was impressed. CayCay