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Image result for two sapling living oaks close together in the stages of their growth Actually a poem form called Telsa. Not sure this is right.

Two As One

Two sapling oaks in early spring
Soft sage color their tender leaves wave
Light reflects

Verdant leaves intertwine in summer
Their bond has stood the test of time
What will gnarled limbs reach next 

When winter comes, and twisted limbs fall
The light shines through and reaches brush
Younger life must rise, life that's complex

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Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/20/2025 9:55:00 AM

Lovely, insightful piece, Sara! Janice

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/20/2025 11:45:00 AM

Why, thank you, Janice. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara K

Bill Baker

Date: 7/15/2025 5:54:00 PM

Right are not, Sara; it's well-written and a lovely thought put into poetic form. Smiles ~ Blessings, my friend. Bill

Valsa George

Date: 7/15/2025 8:54:00 AM

Together, in rain and sun, the two oaks stood and thrived. When winter comes, they will fall, but giving chance for younger ones to grow and branch out. Thus the older generation paves way to the new generation. Well done, Sara.

Howard Kerr

Date: 7/14/2025 10:58:00 AM

Sara, It is such a privilege to read and reread this majestic magnum opus. I admire the infusion of colour and rich philosophical perspective underpining each line Rounds of applause Howard

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/14/2025 11:26:00 AM

Why thank you, Howard. I appreciate your insightfulness in your comments..Not everyone gets it. Sara K

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/13/2025 3:47:00 PM

Yes life is that complex but when we are living it, the simpler we make it the better. always together in hope. Nicely penned Sara , thank you for sharing your talent and your mind

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/13/2025 5:14:00 PM

I agree, Mystic RR, simplicity makes life less stressful and complicated. Thanks for dropping by with such a nice review of my work. Sara K

James Peranteau

Date: 7/13/2025 2:19:00 PM

...if'n ya look close dear poet, yep, in thuh hammock be yourz truly nestled in the oak spy'n the beauty you presented here for your fans ') ty...much love

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/13/2025 5:12:00 PM

So that is you, James? Thanks for spying and finding something good to say. I appreciate it. Sara K

Hiya Sharma

Date: 7/13/2025 12:09:00 AM

Oh wow, what a richly evocative poem this is, that serves a deeper philosophical perspective and paints the image of those two oaks in such a vibrant manner. I love how you've made comparisons with life here and especially your artistic wordsmithery "Soft sage color their tender leaves wave", "Their bond has stood the test of time", "Younger life must rise, life that's complex " So much you've conveyed in that last line! Absolutely stunning! Keep writing and shining always ~

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/13/2025 4:21:00 AM

Hiya, I am so delighted that you saw the deeper meaning of this one. My husband are now the older ones who will have to give way to the younger ones who will rise to live life and how I hope it is lived with kindness and love. Sara K