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the golden paint colours the beauty of hypnotised 

There was once a spark in Heaven's sky 
generating an electric storm painted an angel 
it coloured a rainbow within the sky mystery of the east 
a bridge where the eyes walked on filled with warmth 
The breath of a thousand winds held silent surrender 
so clear was the promise made Unto God Himself 
it begged for Mercy thanking Him for such a gift 
I found a love so great it worshipped with salted drops
forming the most precious pearl inside a shell  
it burned like acid devoured with the pain of not knowing why you deserted the truth 
Deeply engraved there stands words spun by the man 
an oath once taken can never be broken welded to his nature
never really knowing the future had became mapped in a journey
it went into darkness calling your name over and over again 
in the Light of forgiveness I thank you with all my heart  
we all hold out for Hope in finding Paradise one day within a storm

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Date: 7/6/2022 8:50:00 PM
There is always hope in the storm that skies will behold that rainbow. A profound piece Liam. Blessings xxoo
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 7/11/2022 3:31:00 PM
bless you dear sister when the storm clears there is only one ship I wish to be on smiling thank you deeply for the wonderful comment greatly appreciated

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