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Kyle the Smile at age 3

Things My Child Said

It is quite common to kiss 'ouchys' on those wee.
At three, my son asked to have bath autonomy.
I tossed a washcloth, then stood where he could not see.
Soon, he called out with words that completely shook me,
"Mom, it washed red and sore, please come kiss my pee-pee."

Shopping, strolling him down the grocery store aisle
where female hygiene products are sorted in piles,
my son, age four, earnestly said, "When I'm grown, I'll
buy all these things with flowers on them for my wife."
His words styled a smile in me that would last for life.

I used mild-applied wooden spoons for mood anchors.
This set me up for disgust from food cart flankers
when my son yelled, "Look Mom, a hole bag of spankers."
My child, four, eyed that, not the shelved Power Rangers?
I hoped no one would report child welfare dangers.

Once, when a minister summed up his sermon's span
asking "Who's the greatest force in the universe?",
my son, at five, stood up with some dramatic plan.
Lifting his toy hero as high as small ones can,
he enthusiastically declared, "Batman!"

Thoughts of vacation, developed my fav word pearl,
"How many times do I wake up before Disney World?"
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Date: 3/30/2025 4:34:00 PM
CayCay, the bit about spoons touched me. I hope you were gentle, and at least he didn't seem too concerned. Really funny! Smiles!!
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Date: 3/27/2025 8:13:00 PM
This is an absolute delight, CayCay! Don't or kids say the most delicious things?! Why can't we bottle their imagination and open it whenever we're going stale?! Enjoy!
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Date: 3/27/2025 9:16:00 AM
Your son so very special I Remember, For whom your heart forever tender. Good luck in the contest my friend. Hugs and blessings Jenny.
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Date: 3/27/2025 8:53:00 AM
Children are quite naive, quite intelligent too. Sometimes their words and actions will make us chuckle not on the moment, but each time when we think of them, even after years. I feel, your son must have been quite smart when young. Cay Cay, please note that the sponsor of the contest insists that the poem should be of ten lines or less. if you have entered it for the contest, reduce it to ten lines.
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 3/27/2025 9:38:00 PM
Oh, my gosh - I completely forgot about the 10 lines! What to do? What to edit? I have to go and 'word carve', don't want to do that to my son, but ... Thank you so much for telling me ... CayCay
Date: 3/27/2025 2:50:00 AM
From the mouth of innocent children. Loved it.
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